高中入学考试书面表达评分标准
1.打分时，首先根据短文和语言表达初步决定自己所属的等级，然后根据该等级的要求衡量或调整等级，最后给分。
2.本大题满分为15分，没有小数点后分数。分5个等级。
3.如果文章中出现实际人名和教名，就扣2分。
第一段(13-15分):包含所有要点，运用了丰富的语言结构和词汇，词汇准确，语法正确，句子流畅，句子连贯，表达清晰，语言运用能力强。
第二段(10-12分):基本包含所有要点，应用丰富的语言结构和词汇。文章流畅，表达清楚，但有一些错误。
第三段(7-9分):内容包含大多数要点，语言表达过于简单，句子不流畅，有一些语言错误，对整体理解影响不大。
第四段(4-6分):只包含少数要点，语言不标准化，文章没有条理，文章不连贯，语言错误严重，影响理解。
第5段(0-3分):只写与请求的内容相关的信息词，语言错误很多。
修改单词和句子
要正确地发送单词，要注意词性和单词的语法形式。造句时要注意句子结构，要符合英语的五种基本句型，即主表。主说；主要谓词空白；主说简宾直宾；主说彬彬补充。造句时尽量反映结构多样化，反映英语句子的特点。单词、短语、句子都可以作为句子成分使用，成分也可以有成分，从句可以有从属从句。中学阶段学习的三大节(副词节、定语节、宾语节)可以适当使用。
1.文明旅行
不文明的行为(uncivilized behaviors)
uncivilized behaviors have seriously affected our city ' s image .
uncivilized behavior is becoming a real problem for guiling as a tourism city。
as a student and one of the citizens of guiling，we must say no to uncivilized behaviors。
交通规则(traffic rules)
we must obey the traffic rules so that everybody in our city can enjoy a smooth and safe traveling .
traffic rules are for any one on the road so everybody should obey the traffic rules。
斑马线(zebra crossing)
When crossing the streets，we should walk on the zebra crossing。
use the zebra crossing whenever we cross any road with a zebra crossing。
乱停车(park at your convenience)
when we drive or cycle out do not park our car or bicycle anywhere at our convenience .
信号灯(traffic light)
we mustn ' t go across the street whenever the traffic lights turn red。
we should wait till the traffic lights turn green when crossing street。
越过护栏(climb over the fence)
wemustn ' t climb over the fence when crossing street。
2.公共场所的不文明行为(uncivilized behaviors in public place)
把垃圾随便扔(扔)。
when in public places we shouldn ' t litter around to keep the environment clean .
littering around is an uncivilized behavior so we should avoid it。
大声喧哗(speak or talk loudly)
speaking or talking loudly is a rude behavior so we had better keep lower our voice in public places .
in order not to disturb others we should not speak or talk loudly in public places。
随地吐痰(spit anywhere)
spitting anywhere is unhealthy both for you and people around so we must avoid it。
don ' t spit anywhere to keep our public place clean。
公共场所吸烟(smoke in public place)
do not smoke in public places for the health of yourself and people around。
wemustn ' t smoke in public places for the health of yourself and people around。
3.家庭和学校(uncivilized behaviors at home and school)
尊敬老师和长辈(respect our teachers and elders)
we should respect our teachers and elders。
we should be respect ful to our teachers and elders。
we should show respect for our teachers and elders。
有礼貌又亲切的人(be friendly and kind to others)
be friendly and kind to people around us。
to be a civilized person we should be friendly and kind to people around us .
